I am not very happy with the storytelling on this page. I think the top panel lacks drama, I don't like the fact that the face of the prince is so "accessible", and I think that the maiden who gets turned into a frog, should actually be more of a mutant creature which is something between a human and a frog...so I am working on a revision.
2 comments:
That is a darned nice hand in panel 3 though.....
Thank you :)
It's kind of creepy and "skeletal" ...now if I could just hide the face a bit more....
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